Miss Clue Fanatic: Season 4, Part 9

Scene: After declining the ghosts' offer, the children are soon surrounded by ghosts...

Lucy: -Jumps behind her friends- Guys, we're surrounded!!!

Martha: Calm down Lucy! We can get out of this!

John: Are you nuts!? There's ghosts everywhere!

Martha: -Pinches John's arm-

John: Ow!

Alice/Kristi: Leave us alone!

Vanessa: -Laughs- Guards, get them!

(The ghostly guards hold up their weapons and charge toward the children.)

Martha, Lucy, John, AND Alice: AHHHH!!!

(All of the sudden, their ankles are grabbed and are pulled down into the floor, the guards clashing into each other.)

Scene: The castle basement...

Martha: What? Where are we?

Lucy: I don't know, but it's freaking me out!

Martha: Calm down, or else I might pinch you too!

(A strange ghost enters the room.)

Ghost: No no, there shall be no pinching.

Alice/Kristi: -Gulp- Who are you?

Ghost: I'm Grace, one of the servants here.

John: Are you going to haunt us...? Because that would be so cool!

Alice: No it would not!

Grace: -Laughs- Don't worry, I'm not like the other ghosts.

Lucy: You aren't?

Grace: -Shakes head- I rescued you from that fight, didn't I?

Martha: Well, why aren't you on their side? -Crosses arms-

Grace: I didn't like their behavior, or their desires. I'm pretty sure you four don't like them either.

Alice/Kristi: Ha, you got that right!

(Above, they can hear yelling and the marching of guards.)

Martha: Oh no, they're looking for us!

Lucy: Easy breathes Lucy, easy breathes!

Grace: Follow me, I know somewhere you'll be safe.

Martha: How do we know we can trust you?

Alice: It's either Grace or being ambushed by guards, which one!?

Martha: Fine! Grace, bring us there.

Stay tuned for Season 4, Part 10!

FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • Like O M G!!  Am I dreaming or did pinky just post her fanatic?!?!?!??!?
    64HBS56TE0AI TY Jessizoid!

  • WOOOOHOOOOO I don't know if this one is the best ever, but THIS ONE IS THE BEST EVER!!!! I'm so megaly happy you're back pinky!!!
    64HBS56TE0AI TY Jessizoid!

  • This is just as wonderful as i remember!

    thank you dazzlerdream for the signature
  • I've missed this sooooooooooooooooo much!!! I love you pinky!!  This one is so awesome!!  it was so funny when Martha pinched john!  

  • Thank you! :)

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • edited July 2016
    this is my favorite fanatic story so far!! I have no idea what will happen next! (not that I had any idea what would happen in the other ones)
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  • Oh that was SO close!  I like grace she's nice!!  Thank you thank you thank you pinky!!!!

    GOLDENPUPPYgoldenpuppypicturetacocatTHANKS TACOCAT!!

  • Best best BEST YET!
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  • amazingly written as always!
  • Cool!! thanks for posting Part 9!
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