Miss Clue Fanatic Part Five!

Scene: Martha, Lucy, Anne, Andrew, John, and Alice are in a hallway

Andrew: Mom, don't tell them!

Anne: I must. This has gone too far.

Lucy: Tell us what!?

Alice: This is getting good John! Write this down!

John: Got it!

Anne: I'm afraid I'm going to ask you two to go into the other room.

Alice: Aww...

John: Come on, Alice.

(They walk away)

Martha: What do you need to tell us, Anne?

Anne: It's about my husband.

Lucy: Isn't he in the military?

Anne: -Looks down- No. He was taken away.

Martha: -Gasp- By who?

Andrew: By Harry Pierce and his men.

Martha: But he does real estate, why would he want him?

Andrew: Because...

Lucy: Yes, because?

Anne: Because he was given the formula.

Martha: Oh my gosh...

Lucy: Why didn't you tell us sooner?

Anne: It was too risky. We didn't want to take the chance.

Andrew: I've been trying to build a machine to track him down, even if it was illegal. I want my father back.

Scene: Martha and Lucy are walking home disappointed

Martha: I can't believe that all of this time...He was missing!

Lucy: I know. Now I feel bad for Andrew, he needed our items for the machine.

Martha: Maybe we could help him!

Lucy: Yeah, and get sent to jail in the process.

Martha: True.

(Alice and John pop out of nowhere)

Alice: Tell us everything!

John: The Junior Detectives club would love to hear this!

Alice: -Gasp- Maybe they'll even make me co-leader instead of Julia.

Martha: We said we wouldn't tell. Now get going.

John: Just one piece of information?

Lucy: Nope!

Alice: Oh come on! -Follows them-

John: -Follows them too but trips over something- Ouch!

Martha: Are you okay?

John: Yeah. Hey, it was a hat! -Picks it up- I'll call you George.

Lucy: You collect hats too!?

John: Duh, who doesn't?

Martha and Alice: Not us.

Martha and Alice: Jinx!

Next scene: The Darcy family is eating breakfast.

Jane: You two seem odd this morning, are you alright?

Martha and Lucy: We're fine!

Josh: Are you sure? You haven't had a bite of your breakfast yet.

Martha: We're just full. That's all.

Jane: But you haven't eaten anything since last night.

Lucy: What Martha meant to say was, um...

Martha: That the waffles don't have enough syrup!

Josh: You hate waffles with too much syrup.

Martha: Oh...Right.

Jane: Is there anything you want to tell us?

Lucy: Nothing, nothing at all!

Stay tuned for part six!

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    



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Comments

  • lolol really enjoying this!!
    HAPPY SEPTEMBER
    I hope someone you love is tickling your feet.
    Wowza ;)
  • edited July 2015
    Wait, so they've kidnapped anne's husband?  This is gettin' good!
    keep it up pink! :)
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  • edited July 2015
    - Phew - I wasn't sure 5 was coming today!!! Thanks pinkyB  

    I can't believe the latest news! Poor anne, and poor andrew
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  • edited July 2015
    Wow you're doing awesome pinkyB You're posts are so exciting! I can't wait to see how your plot develops!!

    Also great acting @fowzy and @trinityy ;)

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  • @PinkyB when is part six coming out today?!
    I have 2 cats and 1 fish.  I love sports, my favorite color is yellow
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  • Awesome I found a hat!  And I collect them, even better!

    Wow who knew that Harry pierce kidnapped Anne's husband!!  Is he still alive? and Where is the formula!?

    Very nice work Pinky, keep it up!  We're all Routing for you!


    HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!
  • @yellowsummerdaisy I take a break from my fanatic on Saturdays, part six will be tomorrow!

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  • Don't worry @pinkyB, you've been doing so great you deserve a break!
    Take your time, we'll be here!
    HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!
  • I agree with Fowzy!  Have fun and we'll be here when you put out the next chapter! :D

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  • Hey Pinky, you're doing awesome !
    Can't wait for the next chapter but take your time!!!


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  • Hey sky youre up late!! I think I understand wat a fanatic is now, its really cool!
    count me in pinky as one of your readers!
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  • edited July 2015
    Hey guys we seem to be night owls together.
    @PinkyB, you're doing a great job!
    Love Alice and John! <3  Can't wait until Sunday. :D

    Ask before taking.
  • Hey everyone, I'm new to this place and I see a lot of posts here so I thought I would say HI!
    I just got done reading the fanatic posts, they're really good!  I'm only on chapter 2 of miss clue so I don't know much about the story but these characters are great!  

    Looking forward to more!
    - hugs - 
    Dazzle
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  • Welcome to the Miss Clue forums @Dazzledream!  It's nice to meet you!

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