Miss Clue Fanatic: Season 5, Part 11

edited February 2017 in General
Scene: Martha and Lucy burst into Harry Pierce's lab

Martha: Harry Pierce!

Harry Pierce: What are you two doing here?? Out of my office at once!

Lucy: Harry Pierce, please. We aren't here to start trouble or anything...

Martha: In fact, we need your... H-hel-hel -She clears her throat- help. We need your help.

Harry Pierce: -He narrows his eyes- Why would you want MY help?

Lucy: It's our cousin, Andrew---

Martha: Yeah, Andrew. You know... The son of Noah, the guy who you tricked into--

Lucy: Martha, that's enough! Anyway, Andrew is very sick... You said that you were working on a cure, so we were thinking you would help us?

Harry Pierce: Help you? Ha! What a silly question! Why on earth would I ever help you?

Martha: You want your cure to get recognized, don't you? If you heal Andrew, a poor, thirteen-year-old boy, then you would get noticed.

Harry Pierce: Hmm... -A small grin appears on his face- Fine, I'll help. But just know that my cure won't be free, in fact, it'll be quite expensive.

Lucy: How expensive?

Harry Pierce: One thousand dollars, to be exact.

Martha: A thousand dollars!? That's crazy!

Harry Pierce: Do you want your cousin to live, or not?

Scene: Outside of the lab...

Alice: John, are you sure they said they were coming here?

John: What am I, deaf? Of course they said it!

Alice: Geez... I was just making sure.

John: Sorry.. Sometimes I get mad when I'm excited.

Alice: Okay then, moving on. How are we going to get inside?

John: The same way that Martha and Lucy did, through the back door!

Alice: Good thinking, John! Come on, let's go!

John: Wait a minute...

Alice: -She stops in her tracks- What is it?

John: Is that Harry Pierce? Walking away with Lucy and Martha?

Alice: What, where! -She looks around- Oh, I see them! Where do you think they are going?

John: Only one way to find out... Follow them! -He plays dramatic music on his headphones-

Scene: John and Alice follow them all the way to the Birch Island Hospital

Martha: Alice, John! What are you guys doing here?

Alice: Well, we could ask you the same question.

Lucy: Martha's plan worked! Harry Pierce has agreed to save Andrew.

John: I don't know, guys... It sounds pretty suspicious to me.

Alice: Yeah, ditto.

Martha: I know that it sounds pretty shady, but it's our only option. We can't just let something terrible happen to our cousin, after all.

Alice: Not just your cousin, but my brother, too. I would hate to see something bad happen to him.

John: I know, but do we really want to trust Harry Pierce? He's a lunatic! He could easily be tricking us.

Lucy: John does have a point... What if he really is lying to us?

Martha: I wouldn't be surprised if this was all a trick, but like I said, it's a risk worth the taking.

John: Guys, we can't get desperate!

Alice: We aren't, John. We're just trying to say that this is a very serious situation, so--

John: Exactly! Which is why we need to use common sense!

Martha: Do you not care about Andrew??

John: Of course I care, but I don't want to be dumb either. -He covers his mouth-

Lucy: Oh dear... This isn't going to end well...

Stay tuned for Season 5, Part 12!
Which side?
  1. Pick Your Side! Who do you agree with?
    1. I stand with John! Pierce shouldn't be trusted!
      62.50%
    2. I stand with Martha! Andrew needs the help!
      37.50%

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Comments

  • This is beautiful to see pinky posting, it almost brings tears to my eyes XD

    Very dramatic episode I went with John, the guy knows what he's talking about.  Besides if Harry could think of cure then surely someone who is smarter than him like Richard or Martha's Dad could.  they are both scientists after all!
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  • Aww! Thank you @Fowzy! :D Also, good point that you made about John.

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • Posting to bring higher ^-^

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  • OMG OMG OMG!!!!! PINKY!!!!! (Hugs Forever!!!!)  I love your newest part!!  I agree with john you can't trust harry no matter how much you want to!   I love Andrew too but I wouldn't trust Andrew with Harry Pierce, he would most likely have a mind control drug in the stuff too!!  so even if he healed Andrew it would probably make him a zombie!!!


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  • Thanks @goldenpuppy! :D Everyone seems to agree with John so far, hmm...

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  • I would really love to agree with Martha but Harry pierce has been so bad!  I'll pray that someone else finds a cure!!!

    I love your stories pinky!! I can't wait see the next part I'm so worried about Andrew!

    Also pinky if your story chooses to trust Harry Pierce then definitely go where the story takes you it's okay that we are siding with john!
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  • Oh dear... Martha won't be too happy about this... But don't worry! I won't let her see the poll!

    Oh no, she's entering the room now, gotta go!
  • hi hi @LucyFromFanatic!!! cool to see you posting again!!

    great great great part 11, @PinkyB!! can't wait to see the next part 12!!

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    I WOULD THINK OF YOU COLONEL BRANDON!!!!
    oh his hair... if I could only touch his hair
    Alan Rickman - 1946 - 2016  :(
  • Sorry to make Martha unhappy @LucyFromFanatic!  I voted for martha!
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  • I voted for John!


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  • This is so fantastic!!  Thanks for posting the next part in the series!
    I am a total mystery girl!
    Never without my magnifying glass <3
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    Thanks to @bluewiz for this amazing Secret Santa Christmas present!!
  • @PinkyB I'm so happy you're back I've missed you so much!!!  I love this new part no matter which way it goes!!
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