Miss Clue Fanatic: Season 2, Part 12/The Movie

SURPRISE! Part 12 of Season 2 is also the MISS CLUE FANATIC MOVIE!

Scene: The group is planning a rescue plan for Anne and John

Martha: Well, we can't leave without Anne or John.

Lucy: Of course we can't!

Andrew: But how will we find them?

Alice/Kristi: Don't worry, we know where they are.

Andrew: Really? You do?

Martha: -Nods- We should probably go there now before the guards come back here.

Lucy: There's only one problem...

Alice/Kristi: Great, another problem.

Andrew: Oh please. I've had much more problems in my life. Why are you even complaining?

Alice/Kristi: No need to be negative!

Andrew: -Rolls eyes- Do you have a dad?

Alice/Kristi: Of course I do.

Andrew: My dad is a maniac. Do you have a mom?

Alice/Kristi: I thought that I didn't have one before, but I know that I do now.

Andrew: I'm hoping that my mom is still alive. Compared to my life, your life sounds like paraside.

Alice/Kristi: Listen you!---

Martha: Guys, guys. Not to sound rude, but we need to focus on the current issues instead of arguing.

Lucy: -Nods- I agree with Martha. We need to find Anne and John, and fast too.

Andrew: Oh, so you're saying that my problems aren't that important to be discussed?

Martha: No, I'm not. But you're complaining about your family when we're trying to find your mother!

Andrew: So now I'm whiny??

Martha: -Eyes twitch- You always complain! About every little thing!

Andrew: I do not! I'm insulted!

Lucy: -Sighs and looks at Alice- Are we ever going to get out of here?

Alice/Kristi: I hope so Lucy.

Martha: You're always "insulted" too. -Crosses arms-

Andrew: You know what, fine! I'll look for my mom myself! And since I "complain about my family all the time", I won't even look for John!

Lucy: Andrew! We have to do this together! We're also your family!

Martha: Lucy's right. You can't leave.

Andrew: I can make my own choices.

Alice/Kristi: Well then, what's your choice?

Andrew: -Mumbles- Fine, I'll stay.

Scene two: At the secret passage

John: -Is singing while crying a little- I'm all alone... All alone!! ALL ALONE!!!

Anne: John, John, you've been singing that only line for almost half an hour.

John: But it's true... I'm all alone!!!

Anne: Well, what about me? I'm trapped here too.

John: -Sigh- It isn't the same.

Anne: I noticed that you're crying. Cheer up, we'll find some way to get out of here.

John: But how will we?

Anne: I don't know, but I'll figure out something.

John: Wait a minute! I got it!

Anne: What is it John?

John: -Pulls out bobby pin- No Detective Club member has no bobby pin on them!

Anne: -Eyes widen- A bobby pin! Can you pick the lock with it?

John: I think so... Let me see. -He puts the pin into the lock and wiggles it around. It unlocks-

John: We're free! We're free!

Anne: Not to loud, but yes, we're finally free! Now let's find the others!

(They start running forward until they bump into the kids)

Andrew: Mom!

Anne: Andrew! -Hugs- Thank goodness you're alright!

Andrew: Same for you Mom!

Alice/Kristi: Ahem...

Anne: Kristi! You're okay too! -Hugs-

(Martha & Lucy join in on the hug, and John randomly joins in too)

John: Random group hug!

Alice/Kristi: Oh my gosh! Fowzy!

John: Trinityy!

Andrew: Wait a minute... Her name is Kristi?

Anne: -Smiles- There's something I need to tell you Andrew. Alice here, is Kristi, your long lost sister.

Andrew: -Eyes widen- She's still alive?

Alice/Kristi: Thank goodness I am...

Lucy: -Chuckles-

Andrew: Um, sorry for saying those things. I guess we sort of share a life.

Alice/Kristi: Apology accepted. -Hugs-

Andrew: Oh, um, okay, we're hugging.

Martha: -Cough- Awkward. -Cough-

Anne: We really need to leave this place kids.

Martha: I couldn't agree more Anne. Let's get out of here!

Scene three: They're finally outside of the lab and are heading towards

Martha: I can't believe we're finally getting out of here!

Alice/Kristi: I know! It feels like it's been forever!

John: I'm so excited to see my hat collection again!

Lucy: I'm happy too, but we couldn't get our necklaces...

Martha: We'll call the police and they'll handle it. We'll have those necklaces back in no time!

Lucy: Are you sure..?

Martha: Positive!

Anne: I really do hope that the police will get them, I don't want Harry Pierce anywhere near that formula.

Andrew: Me neither.

(They reach the door, but it's locked)

Andrew: Huh? It's locked.

John: This can't be good...

Harry Pierce: (From the outside) Thought that you were going to escape?

Julia: -Chuckles- How cute!

Andrew: Julia! You're in on this?

Julia: Of course, why wouldn't I side with my own father?

Andrew: I can't believe you!

Julia: Believe it.

Martha: You disgust me!

Harry Pierce: No need to gang up on my daughter.

Julia: Thanks dad. -Crosses arms-

Anne: You better unlock this door Pierce!

Harry Pierce: Ha, or what?

Anne: You don't want to know.

Harry Pierce: You lost, I won. -Shows them their necklaces-

Lucy: Oh no! Our necklaces!

Julia: They're not your necklaces anymore, they're ours!

Harry Pierce: Correct Julia.

(Police show up.)

Officer: I don't think so Pierce. -Puts on hand cuffs-

Harry Pierce: What? You can't prove anything!

Officer: Of course we can. -They say, guiding him to the police car-

Harry Pierce: You may have caught me, but they shall never escape! RICHARD! Set the bomb!

Martha: THE BOMB?

Alice/Kristi: Mom! What's going on??

Anne: I don't know!

(Richard shows up behind them with a bomb in hand.  He sets the time.)

Anne: Noah! What are you doing?

Richard: I'm doing what I'm told to do.

Lucy: We have to get out of here!

Richard: There is no escape.

John: -Runs into the living room-

Alice/Kristi: John! Wait up!

(The rest of them follow John.)

John: -Saying quietly- When I came in here to protect Alice from that dog, I found a door that lead to the basement!

Martha: We can escape through the basement exit!

John: Exactly! Come on, let's go!

(They quickly go through the door... But Richard grabs Andrew without them knowing. Richard shuts the door.)

Andrew: Dad! Let me go! Please!

Richard: I must do what Mr. Pierce says.

Andrew: But I'm your son! Don't you know that?

Richard: I have no son, just one daughter, Alice. I let her escape.

Andrew: Dad! I know you're in there somewhere!

Richard: For the last time, I am not your father.

Andrew: I can't believe this is happening... Don't you know that this explosion will hurt you too??

Richard: Of course I do. But I cannot disobey Mr. Pierce.

Andrew: Yes you can! He doesn't control you!

Richard: Silence!

Scene four: The group is outside of the house

John: Freedom! Sweet, sweet freedom!

Alice/Kristi: Living another day!

Martha: Woohoo! It's all over!

Lucy: Um, where's Andrew..?

Anne: Oh my gosh! He was right behind us! I have to go back in!

John: But what about the bomb?

Anne: He's my son, I must protect him!

Alice/Kristi: I'll go with you!

Anne: No Kristi, you must stay here.

(Before Anne can go back inside... The house explodes.)

Anne: ANDREW! No!

(....End Credits....)

Stay tuned for Season 2, Part 13




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Comments

  • so COOL!  This really made my morning i love it! great writing @PinkyB :D
  • this was great! I have really been enjoying your fanatic. Keep it up!  :(|)
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  • Great addition to a GREAT STORY!!!!!!  <:-P <:-P <:-P
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  • Wow that was totally unexpected Pinky!  I don't know where you are taking this but I'll be here for it!
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  • edited February 2016
    Oh my gosh!! How many people died!?!? Did the police die along with Richard, Andrew and Mr Pierce? How tragic!!!  Poor Andrew and now Kristi will never know her father either!

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  • Whoa how are they every going to un-brain wash Richard?!?!  This is some really heavy stuff!  god work pinky!! I am on the edge of my seat for the next one!  (I am also secretly hoping that Andrew lived!)

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  • @goldenpuppy, the police take Harry away before he tells Richard to set the bomb, so nobody was in the house except Richard and Andrew, I am not sure where Julia went but she always manages to get out of places so I am sure she got out when her Dad did!
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  • Okay now that I so didn't see coming, nice twist there Pinky!  This is like Harry Pierce's house right? if it blew up, He totally got what was coming to him!  Man that is sad if they died, maybe they are still alive and can be taken to the hospital!
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  • Woohoo! Glad that everyone liked it! :) :)

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  • No no no!!! They can't be dead!! I won't believe it!! Andrew was annoying but he shouldn't die!!! don't die Andrew and Richard, I am going to hope with misty!!  Live! 

    PINKY!! I need to know, we need the next part!  I can't go on not knowing if they lived or died!!!
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  • To everyone who really wants to know if they're alive or not:

    Part 13 will be soon! Hang in there!

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  • They cant be dead they just cant!!! PINKY this cant happen!!!!! AHHHHHHHH

  • 100 views in one day! Awesome!

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  • Wow, that is really impressive @PinkyB congratulations, you are becoming famous!
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  • edited February 2016
    whoa this is heavy, who just died? all of them or just some? and are they really dead or not? when are you coming out with the next part?   :ar!
  • The next part will be soon Jungle! But not gonna say when! It'll be a surprise :)

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  • great, thanks for the info :ar!
  • No problem! Keep your eyes open, and the spread the word too!

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