Miss Clue Fanatic: Season 5, Part 6

Scene: It's night, and in their bedroom, Martha hears something at her window...

Martha: (Is asleep) Zzzz...

(Something is thrown at the window)

Martha: (Wakes up, yawns) What was that?

(The sound is repeated.)

Martha: (Walks out to window and opens it) Alice, John! What are you doing throwing rocks at my window?

Alice: Get dressed and come out here!

John: Yeah, we need to hurry!

Martha: What! It's 12:30 in the morning! I'm going back to sleep...

John: Fine, I guess we'll just sneak into Harry Pierce's new lab without you...

Martha: Wait... Harry Pierce has a new lab? He's in Birch Island already?

Alice: Mmm-hmm, and thanks to the power of the internet, we were able to find its location!

Martha: I'll be right down there!

Scene: Martha is all dressed and is heading outside, but she accidentally woke up Lucy...

Martha: (Is tip toeing to the door)

Lucy: Ahem...

Martha: Lucy! What are you doing out of bed?

Lucy: What are YOU doing out of bed? AND wearing outdoor clothes, AND are about to go--

Martha: I get it already! Just go back to sleep, this is none of your concern.

Lucy: (Crosses arms) I'm not leaving until you tell me what's going on.

Martha: Ha, or what?

Lucy: Mother, father!

Martha: Quiet! Fine, I'll tell you, but only if you don't go and tattle on me.

Lucy: I won't, now tell me already!

Martha: I'm going to sneak out with John and Alice, to try and find out some things about Harry Pierce.

Lucy: ....

Lucy: Mom, Dad! Martha is trying to leave the house!

Martha: HEY! You said you wouldn't tell!

Lucy: I lie sometimes. Hurry, quick!

(Martha suddenly pounces on Lucy and covers her mouth.)

Martha: Well, then I guess you're coming with us! (Drags her outside.)

(Josh and Jane come downstairs, but see no one.)

Jane: I guess it was just our imagination..

Scene: Outside.

Martha: Alright, let's go!

Alice: You're bringing Lucy with you? Er, are you sure that's a good idea?

Martha: It was either bring here with us or get in huge trouble by our parents...

John: I do prefer not being grounded... Okay, let's get going!

Lucy: No, no, no! (Breaks free from Martha) I'm not going anywhere!

Martha: Oh yes you are!

Lucy: I'm not even dressed properly, I'm in my rainbow pajamas, how embarrassing! And what about the virus? We might get sick!

John: Oh man, we completely forgot about the virus!

Alice: Er, what are going to do?

Martha: We can worry about the virus later... Besides, who would build a lab in an area infested with a disease? Well, highly infested at least.

John: True. Let's go!

Martha: That includes you too Lucy. (Drags Lucy along with them)

Lucy: Let go of me! You brutes!

Stay tuned for Season 5, Part 7!

FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • You really bring the characters to life pinky!  I imagine so many things while reading!  Like how Martha is holding on to Lucy, or the faces they make as they talk!  I love where you are going!  The only thing that would make this perfect is if Lucy was better!
  • You posted part 6!! I LOVE YOU PINKY!  Alright break in time!  ( crosses fingers Lucy doesn't ruin it!)
    64HBS56TE0AI TY Jessizoid!

  • cool you posted the next part thanks @PinkyB
  • I am a REALLY big fan of your writing, and I mean a REALLY BIG fan.  It's so intriguing, and really scary when you want it to be!
    I've been looking forward to you posting your next part, and I'm so glad you did.  I jumped in my chair when I saw that you were back and had posted! lol

    Again thanks so much!  I'm going to read this part again. <3 :D
    Why waste time trying to fix things that are broken when we need to spend more time fixing things that aren't broken.
  • Aww! Thanks guys! These words made my day. :) 

    @ColourzRnice Yay! Honestly while I write (or type) the fanatics I picture all of it in my mind haha. Glad that my readers do the same!

    @MidnightMystery Thank you! ^.^ And you're reading it again, yay!

    @iStella Hmm... We'll just see what Lucy does...

    @Footbalrocks Thanks!!

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • EEK!! they are going to break into the lab!  I sure hope they don't get caught!!

    GOLDENPUPPYgoldenpuppypicturetacocatTHANKS TACOCAT!!

  • @goldenpuppy Suspense! :O

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • -Casually posts to bring Discussion higher-

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  • edited September 2016
    Thanks @PinkyB I wouldn't have wanted to missed this!  Your stories are so captivating!  Keep it up we love it!

    thank you dazzlerdream for the signature
  • Thank you @MistyMew! :)

    NOTE: Will be posting Part 7 on Saturday.

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • Thanks so much for posting, this is the best ever!
    Why waste time trying to fix things that are broken when we need to spend more time fixing things that aren't broken.
  • Thank you @MidnightMystery ^_^

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • wooo this is so awesome! i can't believe i missed part 6, i was wondering what happened to it, i never got a chance to read it!
    thanks so much for writing these @PinkyB they always make me so happy when i read them! i can't wait until you post part 8! :)


    oh his hair... if I could only touch his hair
    Alan Rickman - 1946 - 2016  :(
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