Miss Clue Fanatic Part Six!

PinkyB · July 2015

Scene: John visits Alice

John: Alice! I have great news!

Alice: What is it Fowzy??

John: The Detectives Club is being re-located! To a better, more fun location. All of the members have to move by Friday.

Alice: New location?? But I like it here! So does my dad.

John: Alex will like it there better!

Alice: Mr. Alex!

John: Eh, no difference. At least try considering moving?

Alice: I guess I will.

John: Good. Now I'm going to go home before my aunt freaks out. Cya!

Alice: Talk to you later!

Next scene: Josh, Jane, Lucy, and Martha are playing Monopoly

Martha: HA! I got the Boardwalk!

Lucy: You always get the Boardwalk.

Martha: That's because I'm lucky.

Josh: I'll pay you 150 Monopoly dollars for it?

Martha: Nope. Sorry dad.

Jane: Oh no! I have to go to jail!

Lucy: Again?

Jane: Yes, again.

(Someone rings the doorbell)

Martha: I'll get it! -Walks to door-

Next scene: Martha is in the entrance room

Martha: -Opens door- Andrew? What are you doing here?

Andrew: Where is he!? Where's my dad?

Martha: What? I don't know where cousin Richard is.

Andrew: Don't lie to me! I thought you were my cousin!

Martha: So says the one who stole from our basement...

Andrew: Don't change the topic. Where is he?

Martha: I'm telling the truth. I have no idea where your dad is.

Andrew: Oh really?

Martha: Yeah, really!

Andrew: Then why does my machine say that he is in this exact area?

Martha: ...What?

Stay tuned for part seven!

One more thing... As you know, Alice (Real title: Trinityy) and John (Real title: Fowzy) were added to the fanatic because of the contest and could only be here for part four, five, and six. However... You get to vote if they stay or not. Message me your votes saying "Stay" or "Go"

dazzlerdream · July 2015

Thanks PinkyB!

PinkyB · July 2015

@dazzlerdream No problem! Remember to vote :)

dazzlerdream · July 2015

I would say they are nice characters, but they don't need to be in every chapter, so I guess I would vote "Stay" as reoccurring characters!

MistyMew · July 2015

Wooooo thanks @PinkyB! Love your work! This must mean that harry pierce has Andrew's dad under the house!

Vote:

I agree with @Dazzledream

"Stay" but not every chapter

yellowsummerdaisy · July 2015

hi @pinkyb! loving the chapters!

yea i think i agree with @mistymew and @dazzledream stay but not in ever chapter

maybe andrew's dad is tied up in the basement!?!? or maybe josh is in on it?

Wowza · July 2015

woot woot for part 6!!! <:-P <:-P <:-P

i guess no dont keep them, but i dont think you can just get rid of them after this chapter tho

maybe have like a leaving chapter where they move on with their lives or something

SparkleDream · July 2015

STAY

i reelly like alice and john i think stay with al parts

nice ideas and id like to see mre with the ditectev club

:)

NeonHearts · July 2015

Yay Vote time!

I say "No" Don't keep them I like hearing about Lucy, Martha and Andrew!

showjumpingbird · July 2015

Still loving your chapters! um I dont know Im really torn

Ill think about it

SkyLamb · July 2015

I really like Alice and john, but they are a bit distracting and you have to take time out to talk about them instead of the Darcy family. So I guess I would vote: Go