Miss Clue Fanatic Part Twelve!

edited September 2015 in General

Scene: Julia walks into the council's office

Julia: Dad? Do you have a minute?

Harry: Anything for you dear.

Julia: I have some pretty good news.

Harry: What is it?

Julia: I know who have the three necklaces.

Harry: You do!? Who are they?

Julia: You wouldn't believe who! Alice has the third piece, and two other girls have the other pieces.

Harry: What are their names?

Julia: I don't know, but they're in the examining room.

Harry: Don't let them leave.

Julia: Yes father.

Next scene: Julia secretly locks the examining room's door

Lucy: What was that?

Alice: Well, the room next to this is getting re-painted.

Martha: It didn't sound like painting.

Alice: Oh no! I hope they didn't break anything!

Lucy: I guess I could check?

Alice: Okay.

Lucy: -Tries to open door- Hey! The door is locked!

Martha: What?? -Tries to open the door- It is locked!

Alice: No! I can't be locked in here, it's dangerous!

Martha: WHAT? Why?

Alice: I have literally no Pepsi access!

Lucy: NOOOO!

Martha: ...Really? How about no food access?

Lucy: We gotta get out of here!

Alice: Wait! I have a solution! (Pulls out a needle from pocket-

Martha: Oh, a needle. We're saved...

Alice: I can use this to pick the lock.

Martha: Oh! Good idea!

Lucy: Neat.

Alice: -Is picking the lock with needle- Ha, does Julia carry these around in case of emergencies? I don't think so!

(The door opens)

Lucy: We're saved!

Next scene: Martha, Lucy, and Alice are in the club's file room

Alice: So, why are we here again?

Martha: Well, the club stores all of their investigation files here right?

Alice: Right.

Martha: Then maybe we'll find some useful stuff about our cousin Richard.

Lucy: Have you investigated on anyone named Richard?

Alice: We've investigated on four people named Richard. I'll go get the files.

Lucy: Do you think one of them will be cousin Richard?

Martha: I don't know, but I hope so.

Alice: I got the files! -Hands them the files- See if your cousin is in here.

Martha: There he is! Cousin Richard!

Stay tuned for part thirteen!

FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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Comments

  • Wow fantastic, LOVE the use of picking the lock, points for Alice! Also very intriguing 
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  • edited August 2015
    OMG Okay, this time I am going to read with popcorn, hold on, i'll ask my mom to make some!
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  • Oh thank you SO much @PinkyB! I love reading your fanatics!
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  • Great Work Pinky, you do a really good job on your character development!!
    HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!
  • Oh it's so nice to come on and read pinky's fanatic while I wait for miss clue!!! ITs awesome!

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  • Thanks everyone! :'D

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • Oh wow, I like Alice! phew that was close!!!  If they only knew Julia overheard!!! :Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    Great wonderful work!! Keep it coming Pinky!
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  • This story is so cool!  would you mind if I printed it out @PinkyB?  My little sister is learning to read and I think this would really help her, SHE LOVES MYSTERIES!

    Let me know I won't print it without your permission! :)

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  • wow loving this!!  when does part 13 come?  u know thats unlucky, i recommend tomorrow!  :D
  • OMG Who loves Pinky's Fanatics?!?!?
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  • o gosh this is getting intense
    keep it up pinky!
    i cant wait for part 13 to come when are u going to post it?
    keep up the good work :)
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