Miss Clue Fanatic Part Ten!

edited July 2015 in General

Scene: Alice is in a phone conversation with John

John: It's because of my neighbor.

Alice: You mean that Peer guy?

John: It's Pierce, Harry Pierce.

Alice: Well, what about him?

John: He threatened me.

Alice: What!? Why?

John: He seemed... Odd to me. So I spied on him.

Alice: And you got caught?

John: Yes.

Alice: He threatened you because you were spying? That guy is so immature.

John: It's not just that. Alice, I saw that he's a master criminal.

Alice: Oh my gosh!

Next scene: Josh and Jane are talking in the living room at night while Martha and Lucy secretly watch them

Jane: I never thought I would see this day.

Josh: Me neither. Richard has returned.

Jane: He's after Anne this time, he's own wife.

Lucy: (Whispering) This time? What does she mean?

Martha: (Whispering) I don't know...

Josh: He's after us too.

Jane: How do you know?

Josh: The gas leak, that was his kitchen knife.

Jane: But why would he want to get rid of us?

Martha: (Whispering) I wish I had brought popcorn with me.

Lucy: (Whispering) Martha, focus!

Martha: (Whispering) I am, but popcorn would add to the moment!

Josh: Martha and Lucy's necklaces. When the two halves combine, it opens the passage.

Jane: I was worried that he would figure that out...

Josh: But the middle of the necklace is missing from the halves, he'll need it to open it.

Martha: -Looks down at necklace- (Whispering) What passage?

Next scene: Martha and Lucy enter the Guest Room

Lucy: Andrew? Are you awake?

Andrew: Yeah, I'm awake.

Martha: We have a few questions to ask you.

Andrew: Ugh, more questions?

Martha: Sorry, but it's really important.

Andrew: Okay, what is it?

Lucy: Do you know anything about our necklaces?

Andrew: (Silence)

Lucy: Well, do you?

Martha: I think he knows something.

Andrew: I don't know anything.

Martha: Spill it!

Andrew: No!

Lucy: Please Andrew. We have to know!

Martha: Give him the eyes.

Lucy: -Puppy eyes-

Andrew: Fine. I'll tell you. If you combine the three parts of this necklace lead to a hidden passage. In that passage is the formula.

Lucy: -Gasp-

Martha: Go on, continue.

Andrew: You see, the formula can do more than prevent rust. It's powerful.

Lucy: What else can it do?

Andrew: I don't know, Mom hasn't told me.

Martha: Do you know where the middle piece is?

Andrew: Well, my dad gave the two pieces to your dad Josh. Then cousin Josh gave them to you two. He gave the third piece to a girl named, um...

Lucy: Well, who?

Andrew: I can't really remember. Um, Ally? Abigail? Amy? Um...

Martha: (The word Alice goes through her mind) ...Alice?

Andrew: Yeah, Alice! Alice Fields!

Stay tuned for part eleven!

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  • Wow @PinkyB!  You rock at writing!!! I am so into this!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Have you every thought about writing a book?!?!?

    Love love love it (waiting for the next part!)

    -Fanatic Fan!
  • @SkyLamb Thanks so much! Funny that you said that, when I write my mom says I should be an author. :o

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  • @PinkyB Wow really? see, I was right, I totally agree with your mom!
  • @SkyLamb XD I actually have thought about writing a book but I don't know for sure!

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • EEEEKK I'm behind hold on!
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  • OMG.. WOW.. AHOW i mean WHOA I can't believe this! ..........is Speechless
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  • Love the necklace idea, very creative and adds backstory!
  • Oooooo wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!  Can't wait to read more!
  • edited July 2015
    wow great chapter!  love the necklace concept!
    Alice is in on it too?!  and what gas leak!?
    cant WAIT for part 11!!!  great job pinky!


    oh his hair... if I could only touch his hair!
    Alan Rickman - 1946 - 2016  :(
  • Thanks everyone! :)

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  • Since there has been no part eleven for two days, I'll do it on Saturday.

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  • Sounds Like a plan @PinkyB!  You're parts are so awesome I don't mind waiting!  The main thing is to have fun when you write it!
  • WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!  Sorry, haven't posted in like....hold on let me check..whoa four days!  Anyway Nice tie in with Alice, it looks totally planned nice work!

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