Miss Clue Fanatic Part Ten!

edited July 2015 in General

Scene: Alice is in a phone conversation with John

John: It's because of my neighbor.

Alice: You mean that Peer guy?

John: It's Pierce, Harry Pierce.

Alice: Well, what about him?

John: He threatened me.

Alice: What!? Why?

John: He seemed... Odd to me. So I spied on him.

Alice: And you got caught?

John: Yes.

Alice: He threatened you because you were spying? That guy is so immature.

John: It's not just that. Alice, I saw that he's a master criminal.

Alice: Oh my gosh!

Next scene: Josh and Jane are talking in the living room at night while Martha and Lucy secretly watch them

Jane: I never thought I would see this day.

Josh: Me neither. Richard has returned.

Jane: He's after Anne this time, he's own wife.

Lucy: (Whispering) This time? What does she mean?

Martha: (Whispering) I don't know...

Josh: He's after us too.

Jane: How do you know?

Josh: The gas leak, that was his kitchen knife.

Jane: But why would he want to get rid of us?

Martha: (Whispering) I wish I had brought popcorn with me.

Lucy: (Whispering) Martha, focus!

Martha: (Whispering) I am, but popcorn would add to the moment!

Josh: Martha and Lucy's necklaces. When the two halves combine, it opens the passage.

Jane: I was worried that he would figure that out...

Josh: But the middle of the necklace is missing from the halves, he'll need it to open it.

Martha: -Looks down at necklace- (Whispering) What passage?

Next scene: Martha and Lucy enter the Guest Room

Lucy: Andrew? Are you awake?

Andrew: Yeah, I'm awake.

Martha: We have a few questions to ask you.

Andrew: Ugh, more questions?

Martha: Sorry, but it's really important.

Andrew: Okay, what is it?

Lucy: Do you know anything about our necklaces?

Andrew: (Silence)

Lucy: Well, do you?

Martha: I think he knows something.

Andrew: I don't know anything.

Martha: Spill it!

Andrew: No!

Lucy: Please Andrew. We have to know!

Martha: Give him the eyes.

Lucy: -Puppy eyes-

Andrew: Fine. I'll tell you. If you combine the three parts of this necklace lead to a hidden passage. In that passage is the formula.

Lucy: -Gasp-

Martha: Go on, continue.

Andrew: You see, the formula can do more than prevent rust. It's powerful.

Lucy: What else can it do?

Andrew: I don't know, Mom hasn't told me.

Martha: Do you know where the middle piece is?

Andrew: Well, my dad gave the two pieces to your dad Josh. Then cousin Josh gave them to you two. He gave the third piece to a girl named, um...

Lucy: Well, who?

Andrew: I can't really remember. Um, Ally? Abigail? Amy? Um...

Martha: (The word Alice goes through her mind) ...Alice?

Andrew: Yeah, Alice! Alice Fields!

Stay tuned for part eleven!

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Comments

  • Wow @PinkyB!  You rock at writing!!! I am so into this!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Have you every thought about writing a book?!?!?

    Love love love it (waiting for the next part!)

    -Fanatic Fan!
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  • @SkyLamb Thanks so much! Funny that you said that, when I write my mom says I should be an author. :o

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  • @PinkyB Wow really? see, I was right, I totally agree with your mom!
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  • @SkyLamb XD I actually have thought about writing a book but I don't know for sure!

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  • EEEEKK I'm behind hold on!
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  • OMG.. WOW.. AHOW i mean WHOA I can't believe this! ..........is Speechless
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  • Love the necklace idea, very creative and adds backstory!
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  • Oooooo wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!  Can't wait to read more!
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  • edited July 2015
    wow great chapter!  love the necklace concept!
    Alice is in on it too?!  and what gas leak!?
    cant WAIT for part 11!!!  great job pinky!

    alanrickman


    I WOULD THINK OF YOU COLONEL BRANDON!!!!
    oh his hair... if I could only touch his hair!
    Alan Rickman - 1946 - 2016  :(
  • Thanks everyone! :)

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  • Since there has been no part eleven for two days, I'll do it on Saturday.

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  • Sounds Like a plan @PinkyB!  You're parts are so awesome I don't mind waiting!  The main thing is to have fun when you write it!
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  • WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!  Sorry, haven't posted in like....hold on let me check..whoa four days!  Anyway Nice tie in with Alice, it looks totally planned nice work!

    HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!
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