haikus

miloZen

has anyone ever written a haikku poem? i love haikus you make the first line 5 syllables, the second like 7 syllables, & the third line 5 syllables & thats it. here i'll share some inspirational haikkus that i write & you guys can post some too i'd love to see your writing

the haiku poem is so short but it allows for an intense amount of symbolism, turning only 3 lines into a true story if you look close enough. i believe that the key to successful writing is to really delve deep inside yourself, find the darkness, the light & use your own experiences & camouflage them through symbolism, metaphor, etc. i think that the abstract, the questioning, the contemporary is the most inspirational, the most creative & the one that touches the heart the most. there is always a story behind every word, every line. & that story is up to the reader to interpret. so give it a try! dive into yourself & see what haikus you can make.

i wrote this one today

Don't touch me Mary Alice
I have the furniture here
Bye, i can't see lines

love,
milozen

Pringles

Here is a lovely haiku that I wrote.

Pringles are so great
I can eat almost two cans
I really love them

miloZen

@Pringles that's so deep i love it

i wrote this one this morning

Yes, cats are russia
They do not just have wiskers
Let's get lemonade

froggiepower

I have one:  *Edited*

With Blooming Flowers

Storms will brew with spring time rain

And puddles will form

*I've recently been going through files and finding this stuff O.o. O h the magic*

miloZen

@frogiepower very nice but you did a 7-5-7 syllable poem, haikus are 5-7-5

i have one

Prom nut be Helene
There is a hurricane here
Don't go in the wind

froggiepower

@miloZen

Ooops. I forgot lmao. Let me fix that. I thought the first copy was wrong XD

miloZen

i just wrote this cuz im so hungry!

I love hamburgers
Tally eats them as well loop
Please give me onions