Miss Clue Fanatic Part Nine!

Scene: Martha and Lucy find the source of the cry; Andrew

Lucy: Andrew? Is that you?

Andrew: They took her away, they took her away!

Martha: Who took who away?

Andrew: They took my mommy! I mean mom.

Lucy: Oh no! Anne!

Martha: Who is the they??

Andrew: -Sighs and shakes head- Do I have to say?

Martha: Yes, we have to know this.

Andrew: It was my dad... Along with Harry Pierce.

Lucy: What!? Why would he do such a thing?

Martha: And with Pierce? But didn't he kidnap cousin Richard?

Andrew: That's what we all thought... He seemed to be a totally different person!

Lucy: Explain.

(Flash back...)

Richard: -Bursts in through the back door-

Andrew: -Gasps and shows a huge smile- DAD!!!

Andrew: -Runs over and hugs him-

Richard: Move it kid. -Pushes him aside-

Andrew: Dad...?

Harry: -Enters through the back door-

Andrew: Hey! You aren't welcomed here! GET OUT!

Anne: -Rushes inside the room- What's going on here??

Andrew: Mom! Dad is back, and Harry is trying to take him away!

Anne: Richard? Is that really you?

Harry: -Whispers into Richard's ear- Do it.

Richard: -Nods and grabs Anne-

Andrew: Let her go!

(End of flash back)

Andrew: I can't tell anymore, it's just too much.

Martha: I'm so sorry Andrew.

Lucy: You should come home with us. Our parents won't mind.

Martha: You'll be safe there, and they could help with the situation.

Andrew: -Sniffles- Okay...

Next scene: Alice calls John

Alice: Hey John, I've decided about the club and...

John: No need to decide!

Alice: What? Why?

John: The council changed their mind!

Alice: So the club isn't being re-located?

John: Nope. We're staying.

Alice: Best news ever!

John: I guess so.

Alice: I know you were excited, but this town isn't bad!

John: I know, it's not about the town.

Alice: Then why do you want to leave?

John: ...For an escape.

Alice: What do you mean?

Stay tuned for part ten!

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  • Oh, this is great!  Keep up the great story.
  • @RainbowFairy Thank you! :)

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  • Woo woo the part nine train has arrived!
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  • Whoa, I am totally confused here! who IS the bad guy!??!? If I were to guess, I think I would say harry pierce has done something to Andrew's Dad, like mind control!

    Great work @PinkyB

    I'm sure John is wearing his hat ;)
  • @Fowzy Thank you! John is wearing his hat with pride xD

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  • Omg I am a part behind! hold on gotta go back!!
  • edited July 2015
    YAY yay, what a great day!  So many things going on! and now I log in here and see a new FANATIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOO

    - grabs bowl of popcorn  and sits down to read -
  • edited July 2015
    AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What is andrew's DAD DOING?!?!?!?! Maybe Fowzy is right and it is mind control!

    Poor Andrew, my heart goes out to him!

    Love your work pinky Go  go woo!
  • @SkyLamb XD Did you really have popcorn?

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  • lol really enjoying this!!
    but why is richard teaming up with harry?!?!  i cant wait for part 10!
    is that going to be tomorrow or ??
  • OMG actually yes @PinkyB!  My mom had just brought me some popcorn when I logged in here!
  • @SkyLamb Perfect timing! Lol. @SparkleDream You'll have to wait and see!

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  • Thanks for posting part 9!  @PinkyB
    Thank you TACOCAT for my awesome signature pic!
  • when is part 10 coming?!
  • OMG (jaw drop)  This can't be happening!! (going to part ten!)
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  • edited July 2015
    reading part ten!
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