Miss Clue Fanatic: Season 4, Part 4

Scene: The children at still at the Haunted House after the incident

Martha: Are you sure you don't want to go home Lucy?

Lucy: Actually, I've changed my mind... That was pretty scary.

John: Ha, you can say that again!

Martha: -Nods- I'll call Dad and tell him to pick us up early.

Alice: It's pretty weird how the phones worked right when Lucy felt normal.

Lucy: Yeah... The same thing happened the first time.

John: Do you think there could be a connection?

Martha: I don't think so, it was probably just at the same moment somehow. -Dials Dad- Hey Dad, we need you to pick us up early. It happened with Lucy again. Okay, okay, bye. -Hangs up-

Lucy: What did he say?

Martha: He said that he's on his way.

Alice: I hope Andrew still has my back at home...

Martha: Sorry Alice, but I wouldn't rely on him.

Alice: Oh great.

Scene: Back at Anne's house...

Jane: Andrew, I don't think Alice would be in her room all of this time. -Looks at clock-

Andrew: She and John talk A LOT on the phone.

Jane: I'm going to go check on her real quick.

Andrew: No, don't!

Jane: Well, why not?

Andrew: Um, she gets really angry when she's interrupted on the phone.

Jane: I'm just going to check, I won't say anything.

Andrew: Believe me, Mom and Dad have tried, but she just explodes!

Jane: I have to see if she's okay, it's been an hour and dinner is almost ready.

Andrew: -Gets up and quickly runs to Alice's room-

Jane: -Goes to her room and knocks on door- Alice, are you in there?

Andrew: -Talking in a high pitched girly voice- Yes cousin Jane, I'm here!

Jane: Are you alright? Your voice sounds funny.

Andrew: I'm okay! Just joking around with John on the phone!

Jane: Hmm. Well, dinner will be ready in about twenty minutes.

Andrew: Yum, I'll be down when it's done!

(Once Jane leaves, Andrew calls Alice.)

Andrew: Alice! Hurry home!

Scene: The next day, Lucy is at the Doctor's being checked out

Doctor: This is very strange... I've never seen anything like it before.

Josh: Does that mean it's serious?

Doctor: No, it's not serious, but you should keep an eye on this situation.

Jane: May we ask why it is strange?

Doctor: Well, usually you see odd things like these in paranormal books or movies. But never in real life.

Martha: Isn't that impossible? Ghosts don't exist.

Doctor: No, it is not possible. We'll just have to look more into this and find out what she's going through.

Josh: Nothing to worry about, right?

Doctor: Nope. But like I said, keep a good watch on it and let her rest.

Lucy: -Thinks- Paranormal...?

Stay tuned for Season 4, Part 5!







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  • Okay I change what ever opinion I had about Andrew!  He's tha bomb!! Now that is totally a brother you need!! and can I say that was sooooo funny!!  I think it's going to go into my most favorite parts!!

    I hope everyone gets a chance to see it!!


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  • XD Andrew would love to hear that! @iStella

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  • Scary, funny and suspenseful!! I love it!!! Thanks for another AMAZING part @PinkyB I don't know what we would do without you!
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  • oh gosh this is getting intense!! keep it up!
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  • AH!!! the doctor did say what he was seeing?!?!! what does he mean?!?! I need more INFO!!
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  • Thanks guys! Very suspenseful indeed!!

    @SkyLamb Oh that art brought happy tears! Thank you!!!

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  • I have to say, @PinkyB I am totally LOVING your newest fantatic parts!!! WOOO
  • ooo nice art @SkyLamb!  Oh pinky this is getting better each time I am dying to know what happens next!!
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  • Just wanted to say I'm part of your readers!  keep up the good work!
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  • Woohoo 89 views! only 11 more to 100!!

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  • Man, with all the changing of the series on Miss clue, I just wanted to add that I am a reader as well.  Keep up the good work!
  • You guys are the best! :D

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  • edited May 2016
    Petal and sky told me about the new part.  I just read it!  Super awesome work PinkyB!  By the way I'm a reader too!
  • You probably don't know me,  I don't really post much because I never know what to add. Although I read everything on here and I see other people doing this so I wanted to say I'M A READER!
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    My sister and I LOVE YOU PINKY!! we love your fanatics too!!! :Oo I love how Alice didn't get caught!! Andrew is sooooo nice!!  We are to excited to see where this is going!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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