i wrote a song

ive been in a terrible funk lately because my crush got a boyfriend ive just been severly depressed im thinking of dying my hair black but my mom probably wont let me but i might do it anyway

ive been so uninspired to write anything lately but i ended up writing a song about my crush let me know if you HATE IT :( -cries-

(Verses)
I guess that we were never meant to be,
That we were only made from dreams,
Cuz how in the world could you ever like me?

You say you want someone funny, that's not me,
Someone to kill you with their beauty,
But how can I take your breath away with just me?

(pre-chorus)
Can't you see that even though I don't have any of those things,
That you belong with me?
Cuz I'm always thinking you could fall for me like you were shot by cupid,
But I guess that I was just stupid,

(Chorus)
To think that you'd say I'm the one,
And run into my arms,
And never let me go,
To think that you'd go tell your friends,
That you just found the best thing in the world that you never wanna lose,
To think that I'd be by your side,
Through everything & I could fall asleep to those beautiful eyes,
Oh, to think that you'd walk up to me,
And finally say "what you waiting for baby?"
And then you'd kiss me,
And I would fall apart,
And you'd pick me up & twirl me round & round until we die together,
Holding on forever,
And ever,
How stupid of me....to think....that you would want me,

Cuz you don't want meeeeEEEEeeeeEEEeee,
You don't want meeeeEEEEeeeeEEEeee,

You don't want me.

(end)

im taylor swift

milo zen

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Comments

  • that's a great song @miloZen
    pringles
    Thank you TacoCat!!!!!
  • Wow, that song was so touching and emotional. Really liked it. :) Hang in there. (By the way I laughed at the Taylor Swift part XD)

    FANTASTIC! Thanks Taco!!

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  • edited August 2016
    @miloZen It was beautiful. Hang in there.  It's hard not to care when that's all you do but sometimes goodbye gives you access to a new hello
    "I'm not great with advice, may I offer a sarcastic comment instead?"
  • OMG I <3 it! wow great song! :x :x <:-P



  • Wow.... This is such a carefully written song. With lots of emotion. I tried to sing it LOL But Idk if i sang it in the correct rythm. You have a really good gift. In my spare time I write songs as well! I sang one at a talent show, and won 1st place! Really good song, Loved it.




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  • thank you all so much your kind words have given me such inspiration

    milo zen

    \______/harambe\_____/

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  • this was AWESOME!!!

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